Wednesday, 25 August 2021

Despina's writing

 Despina wrote an explanation of Joy, she used the book "How do I feel" to help her. She did a wonderful job explaining the emotion.


7 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Despina, this is great work, you have clearly described what joy feels like in the body. Next time add a picture to go with your explanation, maybe you could paint it?

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  2. Hi Despina, what a great description of Joy you have created. What things bring you joy? My family is one of the things that brings me joy.

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  3. Hi Despina,

    Great description of the emotion of joy, I feel joy when reading this especially seeing you use subtitles and the choice of describing words. Keep up the fantastic work.

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