Hi Lilia, I love your drawing. You have added a lot of detail. Don't forget to add a comment as what it relates to, so we know what the book is that your drawing is about.
Kia Ora Lilia, well done on creating a clear and easy to follow flow chart, you have identified the key parts in the story. Remember with your inside out to describe the personality of the character (likes, dislikes, what they do).
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Hi Lilia, I love your drawing. You have added a lot of detail. Don't forget to add a comment as what it relates to, so we know what the book is that your drawing is about.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lilia, well done on creating a clear and easy to follow flow chart, you have identified the key parts in the story. Remember with your inside out to describe the personality of the character (likes, dislikes, what they do).
ReplyDeleteThat's cool Lilia!
ReplyDeleteGreat description Lilia
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