Hi Lynni, I love your monster Polly, she is very cute. I love how you described her as being "as fluffy as cotton candy" what a great simile. How many dojo points do you have?
Kia Ora Lynni, what a wonderful job you have done with your dojo monster. You have used lots of great similes. Remember when describing to think about the colour, shape, size and texture.
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Hi Lynni, I love your monster Polly, she is very cute. I love how you described her as being "as fluffy as cotton candy" what a great simile. How many dojo points do you have?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lynni, what a wonderful job you have done with your dojo monster. You have used lots of great similes. Remember when describing to think about the colour, shape, size and texture.
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