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Kia Ora Tristan, that pie looks very delicious. I like the design you put on the pastry, it is very creative. Was it tricky to make?
ReplyDeleteHi Tristan,
ReplyDeleteA football themed pie! I wonder what filling it has inside? I hope you enjoyed making and eating it.
Mrs Hamilton