Check out Willa's fantastic brainstorm to describe how the character Fear from the inside out film looks like. She has used some fantastic similes to describe these.
Kia Ora Willa, this has fantastic detail. I like the similes you wrote, especially the one about his checkered shirt. I also appreciate that you chose the colour purple as that is the colour of the character of fear. Do you think the emotion of fear is helpful?
Tena koe Willa, I can see that you have thought a lot about the words you have used to describe fear. I wonder if you could change some of the similes to metaphors - can you remember the difference? Mrs Hamilton
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Kia Ora Willa, this has fantastic detail. I like the similes you wrote, especially the one about his checkered shirt. I also appreciate that you chose the colour purple as that is the colour of the character of fear. Do you think the emotion of fear is helpful?
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ReplyDeleteI can see that you have thought a lot about the words you have used to describe fear. I wonder if you could change some of the similes to metaphors - can you remember the difference?
Mrs Hamilton
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